5 Part Paragraphs

       I personally thought the five part paragraphs were pretty hard at first, but they got easier to do the more you wrote.  I think the same goes for mistakes, one can lead to another and then another.  To write a "good" paragraph I think plot summary should be appropriate so its not too much or too little.  Also, I've seen tons of punctuation errors on the papers and that could be fixed by a couple extra read throughs of the paper.  Also, I noticed embedding the quotes was a little tricky for some classmates because they would put the commentary before the quote and rearrange everything.  I found plot summary to be tricky, because I didn't know whether or not to add more or less, it confused me.
       For my next paragraph, I hope to improve on many different aspects of writing.  For example, sometimes I feel like I ramble on when I write, and I can't do that because keeping focused is important.  My punctuation isn't pitch perfect either, and quotation marks and embedding quotes confuse me so I don't know where to put the periods and everything else.  I hope my next paragraph will be better and I will use this blog post as a reference for the future.  Yeah, that's about it...