AF Project Evaluation

Dan Mongovin:
(Comic Strip)
Dan's comic strip was good, it showed a lot of visual realization of the book, but it looked like it took like 2 minutes to make.

Will/Paul
(Comic Strip)
This is a really good timeline and shows a lot of the main events in the story.  My recommendation is to show maybe some symbolism and what you guys found interesting and added that too.

Sherwin, Ketl, Chase, Zach
(Song, Video)
This video underlined a key part of the story and it was well played out.  It showed that the animals rights were being stripped away and its was shown exactly how I imagined it while reading the book.  Good singing and piano playing, guys.

Blog of the swimmer
(Poem)
This poem shows the tyranny of the pigs and how they eventually take complete control.  It was also really creative how they included tyranny in the poem.  Good job.

Kamron
(Artwork)
This drawing explains a lot of the main events throughout the story.  My advice, show more than just the main events.  For example, the pigs trading with the humans, or the pigs getting drunk.  Its ok to stray from the main storyline.

Sarah, Molly, Grace, Kady
(Movie)
The movie really expressed how the animals felt and showed their lifestyle and cruddy environment they lived in before the revolution.  An overall great job.  Also, the Farmer Jones part was pretty funny.

Matt
(Artwork)
Matt's picture was really good, it introduced a lot of main characters and even showed what Animal Farm could look like.  It was pretty convincing and I thought he did a great job.

Emery
(Video)
Emery described the characters very well and also proved his understanding of the book.  Its really good and it explains almost all of the characters in the book.

Rachel
(Game)
Rachel made a creative game that looked like it took quite a long time to make.  It's really cool and I enjoyed seeing it last week in class.  It looks like a game I'd want to play in the future.

Poop
(Artwork)
This is a wierd, cool picture of the farm getting rained on or something.  Not really sure what's going on in the picture but its cool anyways.

I think my project matched my classmates projects because I noticed a lot of Comic Lifes and they were pretty similar to mine so I think I did just fine.